Comments on: Going There by Ennis James Sheehan https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/06/going-there-by-ennis-james-sheehan/ An eclectic mix of all flavours of genre fiction Mon, 17 Jun 2024 16:12:29 +0000 hourly 1 By: Ennis James Sheehan https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/06/going-there-by-ennis-james-sheehan/#comment-36407 Mon, 17 Jun 2024 16:12:29 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=3062#comment-36407 In reply to Bill Tope.

Thank you Bill! Great comments. Who knows, maybe she’ll be back. I thought I might get her hired by the. competition…

]]> By: Bill Tope https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/06/going-there-by-ennis-james-sheehan/#comment-36386 Sun, 09 Jun 2024 20:07:21 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=3062#comment-36386 Terrific story of a designing, venal predator who ultimately gets what’s coming to her. It’s a little hard to imagine that every single employee of the law firm was behind this scheme, but they would have to be, wouldn’t they? I thought she would get her comeuppance in the end, but I never through that it would be such a group project. One imagines that the MC would not just turn over and accept her fate; she is much to goal directed and evilly ingenious. It would be good to see her gaining some enlightenment regarding how to treat people, and then coming back somehow. Without an epiphany, seeing her ultimately triumph would hardly seem acceptable. The author seems to know his way around a law office; Ennis, are you in fact a budding John Grisham? I sense the same facility with plotting and words. Bravo, sir!

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