Comments on: The Best View in the Bar by J.D. Strange https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/05/the-best-view-by-j-d-strange/ An eclectic mix of all flavours of genre fiction Mon, 03 Jun 2024 12:42:50 +0000 hourly 1 By: J. D. Strange. https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/05/the-best-view-by-j-d-strange/#comment-36363 Mon, 03 Jun 2024 12:42:50 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=3026#comment-36363 Thanks Bill, none of my characters have free will unfortunately, They just prachute in and bad stuff happens.

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By: Bill Tope https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/05/the-best-view-by-j-d-strange/#comment-36361 Fri, 31 May 2024 22:44:41 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=3026#comment-36361 A really bizarre story, J.D. At the beginning I was unsure that “bloodsucker” was a literal epithet, but lo and behold it was. If this guy, the narrator, was an experienced “hunter,” then he hadn’t learnrd much in his travels. Unless, of course, everything, even his insertion in the transparent block, is metaphor. By leaving it unclear, you allow the reader to complete the story and make it turn out the way she wants. Well done!

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