https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/10/first-kiss-by-barry-garelick/ An eclectic mix of all flavours of genre fiction Mon, 28 Oct 2024 03:26:20 +0000 hourly 1 https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/10/first-kiss-by-barry-garelick/#comment-37002 Mon, 28 Oct 2024 03:26:20 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=3381#comment-37002 Great story. Especially for adults who’ve taken loved ones to the hospital.

]]> https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/10/first-kiss-by-barry-garelick/#comment-36998 Sat, 26 Oct 2024 22:30:24 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=3381#comment-36998 A sweet story, Barry. I thoughly recognized the attitudes, small talk and official jargon endemic to a hospital, having spent copious time there myself. Obviously so have you, at some point. I was worried for Anne, and it’s a tiny victory on the author’s part to get the reader to really care about his characters. A pleasant, well written diversion. Thank you.

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