By: Bill Tope

Bill Tope — Tue, 28 May 2024 22:35:17 +0000

Thank you, Gary, for reading and taking the time to write about what you felt. I only wish more FFJ readers/writers would do likewise, if not on my work, then on someone’s! With editorial feedback at a premium in the Small Press, it is heartening to read comments such as yours. Now, I seek not blandishments, but honest and thoughtful and constructive compliments AND criticism. Most writers of our ilk are not supporting ourselves financially with our scribbling and most editors will say little more than “no, thanks” or “doesn’t match our aesthetic” or even nothing at all. Therefore, comments — good or bad — are always welcome, at least by me. BTW, this is the third and final chapter in my “Rosie” trilogy. The editor of FFJ was kind enough to publish all three. Moreover, they comprise three individual chapters in a novel I wrote using many of the same characters. Not published yet, but such is life. Thanks again, Gary!

By: Gary Ives

Gary Ives — Sat, 25 May 2024 21:10:13 +0000

So much truth in “You Can’t Go Home Again” Certainly with old loves. This piece suggests the opening maybe of an old wound. But then if we never looked back once in a while we’d lose perspective and humility. Sad to think there are beaucoup Rosie’s alone for the last act. NIce work, Bill you’ve painted a realistic albeit somber slice of modern American life.

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