Comments on: Bag Lunch by James C. Clar https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/11/bag-lunch-by-james-c-clar/ An eclectic mix of all flavours of genre fiction Sun, 03 Nov 2024 16:40:57 +0000 hourly 1 By: Bill Tope https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/11/bag-lunch-by-james-c-clar/#comment-37031 Sun, 03 Nov 2024 16:40:57 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=3397#comment-37031 I’ve read each Hawaii Police Deteirtice story and now that I’m more familiar with the characters’ personalities and their thought streams are becoming more pronounced,.they are more enjoyable. I thought this was the best one yet! The punch line: that the thief made with only a woman’s lunch — was superb. Really enjoyed it, James. Keep writing!

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