Comments on: Were What? by Doug Hawley https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/03/were-what-by-doug-hawley/ An eclectic mix of all flavours of genre fiction Fri, 15 Mar 2024 02:30:21 +0000 hourly 1 By: Patricia A Bohnert https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/03/were-what-by-doug-hawley/#comment-36121 Fri, 15 Mar 2024 02:30:21 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=2696#comment-36121 A fun read. A few grammar errors that take away from the read. Was looking for more surprise when the ultrasound showed a tail?

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By: Doug Hawley https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/03/were-what-by-doug-hawley/#comment-36104 Tue, 05 Mar 2024 16:50:56 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=2696#comment-36104 BT – Sneaking in a credit for yourself.

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By: Bill Tope https://www.freedomfiction.com/2024/03/were-what-by-doug-hawley/#comment-36103 Tue, 05 Mar 2024 14:26:45 +0000 https://www.freedomfiction.com/?p=2696#comment-36103 Clever. And I believe Jen too; Duke isn’t the sort to be cuckolded. I’m just speculating here, but I imagine the tenor of this story could’ve been quite lewd; thank goodness that cooler literary heads prevailed.

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